Jab pujte the Mata –Pita ko Bhagwan k saman
Aaj wahin yea rista khokla ho gaya hai
Kehlate aaj bhi who Abhibhavak hai
Par unke prati Dayitav kahin kho gaya hai
Manushay aaj k daur mea itna aage bad chukka hai
Ki na jane kyun woh apne aap se dur ho gaya hai
Dhan aur maan sammaan ki doud mea bhagte hue
Apne AAdarsho ko kahin bhul gaya hai
Mohabbat basti thi jahan logo k Dilo mea
Wahin aaj chahat aaj sirf juban tak reh gaya hai
Khilwaad ho raha hai pyar k naam par
Insaan aaj khud apni mohabbat ka dusman hua hai
Bad gaya hai Adaram is jahan mea itna
Dharm ka Nishaan dundala hua hai
Kahin , aatankwaad, lutpaat, durachaar,atyachaar
Kyun koon karaba, Beimaani ka aasra, insaan ka mastisk hua hai
Yea kya ho gaya hai insaan ko yahan
Paripakav hai who Mastisk se par dil se Nisahaaye hua hai
Samay k saath bagte -2, khud apne aap se pichad gaya hai
Samaj wahin hai par Insaniyat ka mulay badal gaya hai
hi deepika,
im a school student and was looking for some info on aatankwaad for a competition. it is amazing how true what u write is. it is amazing and i feel really inspired to write. i also went thru some of ur other poems..
they r really gud.
u shud try it on a bigger scale
loads o luck..
payal